It's Title Time!
by Stephanie Black
Technically, it's still Wednesday, at least in my time zone, so according to Frog Blog rules, I still get full credit for blogging on time. After midnight, it's half credit; after that, you become known as "Rob."
I finished the second draft of my work-in-progress. I'm happy about that. I tried to print it out so I can read through it, but the printer jammed after twenty pages. I hope that isn't symbolic of anything bad. My daughter fixed the printer, so tomorrow I'll finish printing it--ten-point type, single-spaced, and blue ink, all the things you'd never do to a manuscript you're actually submitting. I didn't write it that way, but I formatted it that way for printing to save paper and black ink (because we're forever running out of black ink). I'm not doing a line edit, so I don't need extra space, and I didn't want to use 340 sheets of paper to print it out for a quick read-through.
It's a much different experience reading a manuscript straight through in printed form than it is working through it chapter by chapter on the computer screen. I need to see how it reads as a whole. I know it needs work, but that's okay--that's why it's the second draft, not the final draft. Ironically, given that I'm teaching a class on villains in a few weeks, the villain is currently lame-o.
It has no working title. The file is called novel5draft2, which is dull. By the third draft, it's nice to have something to call it. Once again, I'm turning to our kind, delightful, witty, and all-around awesome blog readers to give me some suggestions. Same rules apply as last time--anyone who submits a title suggestion--whether serious or goofy--will get entered into a drawing. I'll draw a name next Wednesday, and the winner picks whichever of my books he or she would like. And if I end up using any of the suggested titles, I'll send a book to the person who suggested it. Here's a little blurb about the book:
Other info . . . hmm. It takes place in upstate New York in November, so it involves cold, snow, ice, that kind of thing. And rocks play a role in the story. Yeah, rocks.
All suggestions are welcome!
Technically, it's still Wednesday, at least in my time zone, so according to Frog Blog rules, I still get full credit for blogging on time. After midnight, it's half credit; after that, you become known as "Rob."
I finished the second draft of my work-in-progress. I'm happy about that. I tried to print it out so I can read through it, but the printer jammed after twenty pages. I hope that isn't symbolic of anything bad. My daughter fixed the printer, so tomorrow I'll finish printing it--ten-point type, single-spaced, and blue ink, all the things you'd never do to a manuscript you're actually submitting. I didn't write it that way, but I formatted it that way for printing to save paper and black ink (because we're forever running out of black ink). I'm not doing a line edit, so I don't need extra space, and I didn't want to use 340 sheets of paper to print it out for a quick read-through.
It's a much different experience reading a manuscript straight through in printed form than it is working through it chapter by chapter on the computer screen. I need to see how it reads as a whole. I know it needs work, but that's okay--that's why it's the second draft, not the final draft. Ironically, given that I'm teaching a class on villains in a few weeks, the villain is currently lame-o.
It has no working title. The file is called novel5draft2, which is dull. By the third draft, it's nice to have something to call it. Once again, I'm turning to our kind, delightful, witty, and all-around awesome blog readers to give me some suggestions. Same rules apply as last time--anyone who submits a title suggestion--whether serious or goofy--will get entered into a drawing. I'll draw a name next Wednesday, and the winner picks whichever of my books he or she would like. And if I end up using any of the suggested titles, I'll send a book to the person who suggested it. Here's a little blurb about the book:
Ever since her wayward brother, Derek, created a humiliating scene at a family funeral, Abigail Westcott has struggled to mend the rift between Derek and her parents. Derek seems to be getting his life back on track—until someone near him is murdered, and everything from the motive to the murder weapon points to Derek as the killer. Abigail is the only one who believes in him, and her fight to prove his innocence doesn’t sit well with a ruthless killer willing to do whatever it takes to conceal a fifteen-year-old secret.
Other info . . . hmm. It takes place in upstate New York in November, so it involves cold, snow, ice, that kind of thing. And rocks play a role in the story. Yeah, rocks.
All suggestions are welcome!
23 Comments:
Well, if rocks play a part, then one obvious suggestion is Rocky Roads. Or, to keep the alliteration, Ruthless Roads. I won't suggest Ruthless Rocks, but I will take advantage of the names for North by NorthWestcott or Abigail: The Believer.
:D
More serious suggestions include the boring but functional
Proof of Innocence
Guilty Until...
Lethal Secrets
Derailed by Murder
No, I'm not very good at thinking of titles, either.
Means to an End
Beyond the Grave
Once upon an Oyster--wait, that would be a romance, wouldn't it?
Family Connections
Grave Connections
Turn Around
Fair Play
Once upon a New York Winter
Ties that Bind
Binds that Tie
Good Luck! (that's not a title suggestions, it's a salutation :-)
Hm .. .
Rock of Ages (15 year old secret, eh? eh?)
Rock the Boat (Mmm, 70s pop music!)
The Prodigal
Thicker than Water (that's totally never, ever been used)
One Funeral and a Murder(er)
Time Wounds All Heels
Until Proven Innocent (again, totally never, ever used)
All's Well That Doesn't End in Murder
It's All Fun and Games Until Somebody Loses Their (His/Her) Life
Secrets, Secrets Hurt Someone
The Rocky Road Back (Delicious!)
Unreasonable Doubt
Abigail without a Cause
^13 reasons I should go to bed before 1 AM
(word verification: uncryon. Would that be a marker, or a really big suitcase?)
Rock of the Empire (After the state nickname)
Blind Liberty (combination of gods on the state Flag and Seal)
Secret Freedom (The 15 yr old secret that would cost the personm his freedom)
Deadly Diamonds
Overkill in the Catskills
Promitory Compression (Synonyms of rocks and changing)
MOst of them are me being goofy and playing with New York Iinformation or just with words in general.
Rocked by the Past
Condemned by the Past
In His Defense
Holy cow, the other people on here are super title generators.
Family Ties (but only if you add an Alex Keaton scene...)
Secrets Upstate
Upstate Secrets (neither will fly with the Mormon group because they'll think Logan when you say upstate)
These are lousy, but I don't want to pay international shipping on your book, so I hope I win.
Severed Seams-Their lives are coming apart by the seams! Best I got, sorry.
How Abigail helped Wayward Bro Get His Groove Back
A-TEAM versus the Ruthless Killer (Abigail - The Endearingly Angelic Menace)
Turning now to written works ...
And I Will Repay
Swinging the Sword of Justice
Dare Seize the Fire This is from the poem "The Tiger" by William Blake.
What Dread Hand Same Poem.
Stephanie Black, you think you're SO funny. I have feelings! My heart is not made of stone! Mostly!
My/Her Brother's Keeper
Brother for Sale
Oh, Brother!
Brother, What Didst Thou Do?
Moldy Secrets
Old Secrets Die Hard; Brothers Die Harder
Silence of the Secret
What Lies Beneath the Rocks
Unturned Stones
Or something along those lines
Stone Heart
...and I'm very upset with you Miss Black! You said you would post a sample chapter of your latest release on your website a week ago. I've checked everyday. Still not sample chapter. What's up with that?
I'm loving these titles! Y'all are awesome.
Rob has FEELINGS??? Hmm, that's awkward.
Anon, you are so right, and I apologize for not getting that chapter up there like I said I would. I'm trying to get it posted right now, but am having problems--I'll keep at it.
The excerpt is up--www.stephanieblack.net. Sorry I didn't get it posted sooner!
Stone Cold
But not Cold Stone because that would be silly.
(no need to enter me in the drawing, but I had to participate!)
First thing I thought of:
Black Rocks! - would almost make an awesome praise line for the back of the book!
Man, I can't think of a serious title. Everything is either a pun or 50's Noir (Covenant seems pretty good and coming up with these - take a look at Clair Poulson books)
Dredging for Secrets
Past, Over
Brother's Keeper
I have a quick suggestion for anon. Just get out there and buy the book because once you've read the sample chapter you'll be forced to anyway.
Now Stephanie, a suggestion or two:
A Son of Perdition: Full Circle
The Broken Branch: Family Tree
or
Believe in the Method of Fooling the Family: Shockwave
Charlie
Shattered Glass
Saving Derek Westcott
Proving Innocence
Faultless
15 Years and Counting
Twisted Hearts
I'm not really good with titles, but I thought I would try.:) I'm excited to read your book, and would love to do an interview with you on my book blog!:)
Chantele
“Winter’s Solace”
“Broken Trust”
"Deadly Silence"
“Deadly Secrets”
“Dark Secrets”
“Into the Night”
“Cold Hearts”
“Rocky Relationships” (only kidding)
Playing these name games could go on forever, but I have a WIP that I’d like to get back to. (Did you hear that J.S.S.?)
Love Methods of Madness, Stephanie. Keep up the exhausting work.
Deb
Under a Rock
best I've got for today but I liked the last William Blake suggestion.
Scaling the Rock Wall
Walls of Granite
Caught in the Rift
Buried Innocence
Ice Storm
Derailed Intentions
Etched in Stone
Weathering the Rift? (Both words are also geological terms.)
Here's a glossary of geological terms to check out for more inspiration...
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